First Page Critique: The Year of the SSSSSnake

By Jordan Dane My post series on self-publishing (post #2) will continue after this first-page critique. You know the drill. My comments on ...

First Page Critique: Beware the Wolf

By Jordan Dane Please enjoy Beware the Wolf, an anonymous submission for critiquing, My thoughts are on the flip side. *** Hoards of onlooke...

The Case of the Thin Man and the Soft Opening

J ames Scott Bell Twitter.com/jamesscottbell Here is today’s first page: The thin man bent down and scooped up a handful of burnt red s...