First-page critique: CANNIBAL’S HYMN

By Joe Moore I took a break from first-page critiques last time around to make room for my friend and guest blogger Tom Schreck to give u...

First-page critique of ARTIC FIRE

By Joe Moore Here’s another submission to our first-page critiquing extravaganza. It’s called ARCTIC FIRE. Have a look. My thoughts follow...

Kunoichi: Critique

Chapter 1 "Dismantle the bridge after crossing it" Wednesday, August 26 S.S. Palma Soriano, 120 miles off the coast of Sevas...

First-page critique: Untitled

By Joe Moore Our annual first-page critique marathon continues with an anonymous submission that came in untitled. Take a look at it. My c...

First-page critique of LISTEN TO ME

By Joe Moore Today we kick off our annual first-page critiques marathon. This is where we invite you guys to submit the first page (350 wo...